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Okay so its nice that you want to make stuff like this, but next time, put some more work into it. I think the main problem was sound - you should speak up a bit or increase volume or something, and you should write down what are you going to say and do. There was a stranger noise in the beginning I don't know what it was, but it was a bit annoying (not much really). Overall, nice idea, nice try, but put some more effort next time.